Storyboard Development

I am currently considering changes to my storyboard in terms of re-ordering some of the titles. I would like to swap the titles of the director and the film pitch as I think it would read better and would build up the tension of the teaser trailer. I might also move the release date to the end of the trailer to get the audience excited for when they can see the film.

I also think I need to include some more establishing shots before some of my shots to improve the continuity and make it flow better. I will need to do this before my first shot of the character riding on a bike to give an indication of the type of location. This will also contrast with the establishing shot of the graffiti wall later in the trailer to show the dramatic difference in location.

The establishing shot at the beginning of the trailer of the house on a peaceful road identifies a much happier mood, compared to the much darker shot in the second half of the trailer of the graffiti wall. These shots help differentiate between the two locations to show the drastic change in mood and the relationship between the two brothers.